Do you have a favorite tape when you were kids? It’s contains children's songs. The tape that often played when you was a little kid. Usually the songs were also sung by the children.
I have one with a light blue color.
My Mom and Dad was who bought that tape for me. I do not know where they bought the tape. I am very pleased to get that tape. I always play the tape. My Mom and dad bought me the tape because I love to sing.
When I was in kindergarten, I always play the tape each time I got back to my house. My school finished at 10 a.m. My sister was who picked me up that time. After I got home, I’ll go to the living room and play my tape. Sometimes my sister sang together with me.
Now that tape was peeled. My dad kept it for me until now. I’ll never forget my favorite tape.
vith.. i think your santence is not correct. "I always play the tape each time I got back to my house"
BalasHapusin my opinion, word 'play' should be 'played' because it was in the past.
However, let's ask to mr.chosa for the correct answer.. hehe
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BalasHapuspay attention for the tense. . .
you should use past tense to tell it, right? ? ? ?
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BalasHapusUr 2nd paragraph on 1st Line. .Okay??
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your second sentence in your first paragraph said :
BalasHapus"It’s contains children's songs."
I'm afraid that's wrong, dear. I think it should be :
"It’s contain children's songs." or "It contains children's songs."
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@linda: in my opinion, she's correct coz she put"always" word, it means that she plays the tape until now....that's the part of present tense...
BalasHapusvivit :)
BalasHapusare you sure with the sentence "my mom and dad was who bought that tape for me" ???
i think it should be " My mom and dad bought it for me" hhe
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